TIES THAT BIND

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raypool

Fri 16th Aug 2019 10:01

Thanks John. One of those poems that started with a basic human problem and that ladies pick up on. Yes I camped it up a bit with the heavy accent!

Ray

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john short

Thu 15th Aug 2019 23:31

Ray, you sound rather Dickensian in this. What does a lack of awareness of what's going on down there reveal about the character or mind-set of a person? That could be an essay title.

John S

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raypool

Sat 10th Aug 2019 12:45

Thanks Devon. I did have it sorted up to two weeks ago . I hope for some solution but am not quite clear yet !

Hi David. A concise summary and one which fits the bill thanks.
Marriage usually includes the emotional version of the north/south divide, the status quo of circumstance. I'm glad you got to this as it was really to see if I could still download audio clips!

Thanks Graham.

Thanks for the like, Binte !
Ray

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 9th Aug 2019 22:56

PM Paul Emberson Ray

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Wolfgar Miere

Fri 9th Aug 2019 22:51

Yes...

Great recital and poem.

I love a shoelace metaphor.

This portrays a matriarchal guardianship some men particularly appreciate...others not so much. Personally I quite enjoy it in small doses.

David.

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Devon Brock

Fri 9th Aug 2019 22:22

Ray, I can't upload my m4a files either. Same problem you are having. Also, looking for clues.

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raypool

Fri 9th Aug 2019 22:19

I've only posted this as a re post so as to show that I can upload previously used mpfa files but can't do so with my last two poems . Does anyone care?

Ray

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