story time

 when you talk
 about us
 i am
 like an eager child
 jumping up and down
 excitedly urging the story teller on
 anticipating the part where i am the star
 "tell me the part about me!"

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I said to him one afternoon... ►


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Don Matthews

Sat 3rd Aug 2019 11:37

Oh I do like this Eiren. It's succint with short lines which drew me in to the 'punch line' at the end. My kind of stuff. Well done....

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