It was the moment when you became my everything

It was long before I was willing to admit it

It was long before I even started to deny it

It was long before I could no longer ignore it

It was long before I was able to accept it

It was long before I began to embrace it

It was that first accidental conversation

It was nothing more than a passing comment

It was as important as picking the perfect hat

It was how the world around me lost focus

It was the way you held my attention

It was nothing more than that

It was the beginning

It was everything

It was forever

It was you

It was me

It is us

It is we

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Rose Casserley

Wed 31st Jul 2019 10:57

great and well-formatted piece of repetition Eiren.

Rose ?

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Wed 31st Jul 2019 10:16

I really really like this! I love the repetition and the structure - the way the sentences shrink as the poem progresses. It's very poignant. Thank you for sharing.

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