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The Argument

                                                  The Argument

You could not.

Yes, I could.

You would not.

But, yes, I would.

You should not.


You will not!


Cynthia Buell Thomas



◄ The Colour of Death Is Gold

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 18th Mar 2010 12:05

Nothing like running a critique on your own work. I include this because I realized the implications after it was written, not before.

2: Mental/personal
3: Emotional/societal
4: Tyrannical/reactive

Does anyone else try to look at a work as much from the reader's view as possible?

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Sun 14th Mar 2010 01:47

Ditto!!!!! ; )

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Andy N

Sat 13th Mar 2010 23:54

I'm like Janet.. I certainly will! (proper rebel without a cause) lol xx

<Deleted User> (7164)

Sat 13th Mar 2010 13:27

Oh yes i will!
Especially if you dare me to or tell me not to. :-)


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