Colour - Gold

Wealth and extravagance

have an association with you,

Many a fool falls for your shine

and many have died for you, too

 

For children we only wish

them to be as good as you,

while some chase just money,

those diggers we eschew.

gold

◄ Incessant time

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 22nd Jul 2019 20:17

Thank you, Mae.

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Mae Foreman

Mon 22nd Jul 2019 20:00

I love it Jon! Kudos! 🎈
Mae

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 16th Jul 2019 06:30

Thank, Devon. That's it.

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Devon Brock

Mon 15th Jul 2019 21:54

You know, I don't think this poem needs any fleshing out. It is an interesting poem on the various uses of the word "gold" as an adjective, noun, or compound word. At least, that is my take on it.

D

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 15th Jul 2019 12:19

Thanks, Dorothy

Do.RoThY

Mon 15th Jul 2019 10:56

Gold diggers....😈.....precisely written!! So true.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 15th Jul 2019 10:53

Thanks, John and Lisa.

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Lisa C Bassignani

Mon 15th Jul 2019 10:44

It is subjective, indeed.

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john short

Mon 15th Jul 2019 09:25

Jon, rather than just saying nice things, my honest opinion of this is that there's more work to be done. It seems to require another stanza to give the reader a better idea of what it's about and bring the piece into focus. But as I've just added a bit more to one of my old poems possibly that's the mind-set I'm in at the moment. Poetry is so subjective alas.

John S.

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