i'm jealous of the wind that caresses your skin

each breath of air that you breathe in

i'm jealous of the birds that catch your eye

their flight so elegant across the sky

i'm jealous of the song that sticks in your head

and the cotton sheets that cover your bed



◄ upon waking (for the first time)

playground ►


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Eiren Water

Tue 23rd Jul 2019 00:50

Brock, I'm so pleased that you liked it! Also I loved the song you linked, thanks for sharing! Now I am going to speand way too much time listening to their stuff. ?

e. xxx

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Eiren Water

Tue 23rd Jul 2019 00:48

Hi Branwell, I agree with your suggestion, so you may see a second or third verse one of these days. Thanks for the encouragement!

e. xxx

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Eiren Water

Tue 23rd Jul 2019 00:46

Thank you so much for the kind comments Lisa. And yes, I do love clean cotton sheets! It's my happy place. ?

e. xxx

Devon Brock

Fri 12th Jul 2019 23:34

Eiren, great poem! And, you got a song stuck in my head, an oldie, I hope you enjoy.


Insanely Jealous by The Softboys...

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branwell kent

Fri 12th Jul 2019 22:46

I like this, but think there should be a second verse.

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Lisa C Bassignani

Fri 12th Jul 2019 21:22

I agree with Mindy, you do have a lovely, fresh style to your writing.

And there's nothing better than cotton sheets!

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