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Wake Up And Smell Reality

When the hibernation of denial ends and thoughts breaks loose

and all of your senses and your instincts slowly awaken

tell the man who's tending bar in your subconsiouss

to serve your grey matter stirred, not shaken.

 

 

◄ The Summer of my Dismay (Volume 27)

The Madman and The Lunatic ►

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Mae Foreman

Thu 18th Jul 2019 11:37

Thanks heart! Same here! Good to have you back
X.x.?
Mae

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Heart of Lead

Thu 18th Jul 2019 11:19

Ah, delightful! Very clever. Whoever is tending the bar in my brain really isn't doing a great job, ha ha.

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Mae Foreman

Fri 12th Jul 2019 12:38

Thank you so much Jason and Cynthia! Yeap,guilty! Although I can never remember which one it is... "stirred, not shaken" or the opposite... But the "stirred, not shaken" version served my point!
Thank you all for the support! ?
Mae

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 12th Jul 2019 12:10

Terriific. I can't erase my smile - it's GLUED! Another Bond fan! Hurrah!

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 12th Jul 2019 09:59

Four lines very cleverly put together and the wordplay of stirred not shaken put a great big smile on my face. Very clever indeed.

J. x

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Mae Foreman

Fri 12th Jul 2019 09:27

Thank you Don! ?
Mae

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Don Matthews

Fri 12th Jul 2019 00:20

Echo to Martin Mae - very clever

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Mae Foreman

Thu 11th Jul 2019 22:10

Thank you Martin! ? I'm not particularly happy with the title though, but then again, I can think of nothing better! I appreciate the support, thank you!?
Mae

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Martin Elder

Thu 11th Jul 2019 22:06

Very clever Mae. I love it

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