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Cool down

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Cool down

Saturday,29th June 2019

Nights cool the temperature

and bring down the heat over there

the mind rests with peace

and allows the mood to prevail at an ease

the day remains hectic

with no basis however

it involves struggle and hard work

with so many promising words

nothing enters or invades the mind

it has a strong urge to find

some lively means

to win the field

I got to do something as worthwhile"

my love should rise from the file

by unfolding the arms

and make me warm

the thoughts unwillingly enter

and cater

the concept of love

and I give in to believe its holiness

we are a simple creature

and believe for sure

that life is momentary show

let us enjoy and go by the spirit

Hasmukh Mehta

Courtesy:Progressive Artists Group

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afishamongmany

Sat 29th Jun 2019 15:40

This is a good one Hasmukh A., the English works and there are no stumbling blocks.
Particularly like -

'the thoughts unwillingly enter
and cater
the concept of love
and I give in to believe its holiness'

Go well
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