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Love Poem

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Despite what they say

the mind is more

reckless than the heart,

ready to climb aboard

any passing distraction,

waving over it’s shoulder at you

as it stands you up at this table

staring vacantly at the waitress

with the red headband

but it could have just as easily been

the old man in the corner

eating chocolate ice cream alone

or for that matter

the dog tied up on the corner

of the rain drenched street

or this fly investigating itself

in the mirrored coffee jug,

each one deserving

a love song of their own.

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Tom Harding

Thu 13th Jun 2019 21:03

thank you all!
ray, i love don't look back but haven't seen it in years, i will have to dig it out again!

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Wed 12th Jun 2019 16:30

loved the swerving journey this piece took me on

Devon Brock

Tue 11th Jun 2019 23:06

Wonderfully crafted. Flitting from image to image supports the declarative statement, with a stunning final thought.

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raypool

Tue 11th Jun 2019 22:27

Beautifully and simply expressive Tom. I never tire of your work. The last line just rounds it all nicely and the sketch is key to the piece. Nothing to do with this, but I watched Don't Look Now last night and the attention to detail in Venice reminded me of your detailed moments.

Ray

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