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My Fifty Second Birthday Treat

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The total candles on the cake, numbered fifty-two.

I couldn't extinguish fifty-two flames no matter how hard I blew.

The heat became tremendous as the flames grew higher & higher.

The birthday treat turned from a cake into a ball of fire.

Once all the wax had melted, the inferno then decreased.

I could tell by the looks on faces, that no one wanted a piece.

 

◄ Cheap as chips

Mr Robinson ►

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raypool

Mon 29th Apr 2019 19:45

A cake to remember from icing to ember. A variation on your more robust themes John!

Ray

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Mon 29th Apr 2019 07:06

Smoking!

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