Correspondence

Lifeless, empty words

Thrown in haste

On cold-blooded paper

 

Feelings crossed out in shame

Sincerity submerged in ink

Furtive lies

Disheartening small talk

 

All over

 

 

I received your letter

◄ Waste of time

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Jeannot

Thu 11th Apr 2019 11:56

Thank you to you both Josie and Don

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Don Matthews

Thu 11th Apr 2019 09:09

You've hit it spot on Josie. That last punch line...... Once again Jeannot. I love it.

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Josie

Thu 11th Apr 2019 08:09

I love poems like this - where the last line deals a sucker punch! Well done - I love it!

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Jeannot

Wed 10th Apr 2019 23:18

Thank you Don

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Don Matthews

Wed 10th Apr 2019 23:06

Very good Jeannot

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