Correspondence
Lifeless, empty words
Thrown in haste
On cold-blooded paper
Feelings crossed out in shame
Sincerity submerged in ink
Furtive lies
Disheartening small talk
All over
I received your letter
Comments
You've hit it spot on Josie. That last punch line...... Once again Jeannot. I love it.
I love poems like this - where the last line deals a sucker punch! Well done - I love it!
Thank you Don
Very good Jeannot
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Jeannot
Thu 11th Apr 2019 11:56
Thank you to you both Josie and Don