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I Watch As You Become A Woman

I watch as you become a woman
Shedding your girlish skin before me
I stand at the bar, ordering our drinks
And I melt, as you're easier now
Confident and comfortable with everyone
Such growth since those teenage years

Carrying yourself as a woman does
You pick me up from the office
Still in your laboratory scrubs
So articulate and so composed
While I slump my twisted, wiry body
Down hard in the passenger seat
Still ill at ease with who I am

I watch as you become a woman
On those Saturdays from hell
When I writhe in a bed of hate
And you perch lovingly beside me
Saying 'don't do this anymore,
There is more to life than drink'

You're beautiful, you're a woman
There are things that I don't doubt
One day when you've graduated from me
You'll shine like your potential must
Be an amazing loving wife and mother
And reach every height you’re destined for

I watch as you become a woman
But I wonder how long we've got
Before you realise I'm still a boy
I watch as you become a woman
Now I just have to become a man...

(2005)

◄ One of Us Was Right to Leave

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 18th Feb 2010 16:31

This has real charm. It honestly underscores that awkward late teens/early twenties period when the sexes often separate emotionally, and quite dramatically too. Cheers to the young man who recognizes the change and chooses to adapt also. But, the girl/woman in question may not appreciate the 'wife and mother' angle.

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