short poem after chronicling the lessening of sentience in my mothers emails during the past year

one day my mother will die 

trembling yellow fracture 

birdsong on the radio 

◄ Amoebius (For National Poetry Day)

i am made of water and so are you ►

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Stu Buck

Fri 29th Mar 2019 00:30

cheers ray. this got picked up for pub really quickly so thought i'd try it on here but i fear its not in keeping with the current trends on the blogs. never mind, it only took 30 seconds to post! hope your keeping well, do let me know what you think of my book!

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raypool

Thu 28th Mar 2019 22:34

Interesting the contrast of the first line being so definite with the
almost elusive details Stu. Like a picture framed event.

Ray

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