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Dark heart

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They watch as her young heart fades into the darkness 

her wild youth disappears in front of there eyes 

moments of fear and hate runs through her like a dark black fog 

will she ever be the same? Will her heart ever heal? 

Take me back to the hot summer days when all I had was my innocence 

gone.  Just like that. Forever. 

 

JC 

 

 

Bad dayslostnever to be found again.

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Martin Elder

Sun 10th Mar 2019 14:47

This is both brittle and beautiful at the same time. A wonderful heart felt piece of poetry


Nice one

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lisa donohoe

Sun 10th Mar 2019 11:07

Dark days are a major part of our life's...
When we except it and embrace it ' we can then enjoy the brightest days of our entire existence..

Never be afraid of the dark ' your own darkness creates the light that shines trew your soul ?

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Rudy Tabooty

Sat 9th Mar 2019 22:27

Julianna,

Well done! I love the questions that are posed in this piece. The location of the volta is especially intriguing, as you raise the questions I think we all have as we grow. Isn't it pretty to think about those summer days?

-Rodolfo

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