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QUEEN OF THE NIGHT

QUEEN OF THE NIGHT

 

That flower right next to us,

its honey perfume coloured the sea

and all the air breathed after dark.

 

You told me how it grew back home

profusely in the villages, but that

you and your sisters would steal it

 

from a neighbour's garden just for fun

which made me smile at this illicit side

of tricks and secrets as a general rule.

 

Yet as we sat enjoying midnight,

you chose to let me under your defence

for once, with the story of a flower;

 

soft white petals, yellow stamens,

their nocturnal aroma like scented heat

bringing us perhaps a little closer.

 

 

Poesis Novae Litterature, number four, January 2019.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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john short

Sun 31st Mar 2019 11:05

Hi Stu

Glad you liked it. It wasn't easy to write and so there are two or three versions lying around on my computer. This is the definitive version though.

John S

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john short

Sun 31st Mar 2019 11:01

Hi Keith,

Thanks Keith,

Queen of the Night is actually the name of this cactus that grows in Mediterranean and tropical climes. Hopefully readers will get that without an explanation (?)

John S

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Stu Buck

Sat 30th Mar 2019 20:03

this is really fantastic john

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keith jeffries

Sat 30th Mar 2019 19:32

John,
the last two stanzas are quite exquisite. A poem of delicate intimacy.

Thank you
Keith

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john short

Sun 10th Mar 2019 00:55

Hi Vautaw

Thanks for the comment, glad you liked the poem.

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john short

Thu 14th Feb 2019 17:25

Hi Ray,

Thanks for your kind words once more. Had to read up on this flowering cactus before writing the poem. Having a beer outside the hotel in Sitges (closed down now for being old-fashioned) which I was fond of.

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raypool

Sat 2nd Feb 2019 16:15

Lovely memento John. I like the idea of enjoying midnight itself, as if something might qualify that, and then it does! For me that is a pivotal line. Wonderful thing is poetry.

Ray

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sat 2nd Feb 2019 15:33

Nocturnal aroma like scented heat... I could smell the flowers and see you both sitting under the midnight moon. Nice one John! ?

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