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The Unexpected Environmentalist.

Along the river bank

Greasy tide foamed slowly

Oiling the edge.

Rotting among dried crop,

A shopping trolley

Popped it's head above

The dark water.

 

A coffin for seaweed to live in.

 

An unusual air covered the area

Not queit mist,

Almost fog.

Plastic bags, half - dissolved,

Softly whispered up stream

With a silent longing

To get airborn again.

But they too eventually flowed

Into that shopping trolley coffin.

 

Just above, people walked past

On the fenced path

Close enough to feel disgust

Too far away to bother.

 

I had come to this river's edge

For some form of inspiration

And left with wet shins.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 25th Feb 2010 11:28

Vital and sensitive, showing the poet's equal inspiration from mountains and molehills. You have the power of interpretation and the imagination to crystallize ideas using everyday things and simple words.

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Sat 6th Feb 2010 22:03

Well written!!!! liked this very much! xx

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 5th Feb 2010 06:48

Sounds like you got lots of inspiration! I love "close enough to feel disgust Too far away to bother". And that poor plastic bag wanting it's freedom!

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