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ghosts poem

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GHOSTS

Remembering a ferocious machine with a shark face

painted on its nose, bearing those deadly guns like vicious teeth.

Of brown and tan colours to hide it against the flat European terrain,

hunting Germans at three hundred miles an hour,

attacking anything that moved until it was dead.

The roar of engines and the detonation of bombs,

hiding the scream of the wounded in the cacophony of war.

If you shoot this warbird down, another ten will take its place.

Now Europe ripples with the memory of war, of the twin-engined

Yankee attack planes taking on the Nazis and freeing

Europe from tyranny. Peace reigns – but for how long?

◄ trine poem based on a norwegian gal bass player

havoc poem ►

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nick armbrister

Mon 1st Feb 2010 18:38

thanx mate:)

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nick armbrister

Sun 31st Jan 2010 14:43

thanx for your comments Cynthia on my poems. i watched a film called overloard about d-day the other day and took the a-20 havoc/boston warplane pics you see from it. the 2 poems are about the same plane, the film showed great footage of them flying over holland at zero feet and shooting up the dutch barges, as mentioned in my poems. i know war is futile and stupid but the imagery can be quite fascinating. pity the poor ppl caught in the middle tho.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 31st Jan 2010 13:08

Like the 'havoc poem' your description of the planes and the action is straight forward and venal; the imagery of 'deadly guns like vicious teeth' is sharply accurate in both sight and purpose. Past and present united with a question to finish the poem is good poetic strategy.

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