Eternal Relief
Two seconds to make him go
To free me from this pain and woe
A pill, a potion, a knotted rope
To relieve me from this misanthrope.
Comments
Big Sal
Fri 28th Dec 2018 23:27
I think of the story of Prometheus when I read this, Jon.
That is epic. Like a trickster pretending to be God while disguised as a man.
Excellent and concise.?
A great deal of power in this Jon. It punches above its light weight. Completely unexpected - I'm glad I stopped by
Ray
Thanks, Po. Yes, it is. I was not in a good frame of mind when writing this. Was not sure whether to post or not, but I did. We all have our different sides. I am glad this one doesn't come out very often.
So true. Thanks, Brian.
<Deleted User> (18980)
Fri 28th Dec 2018 16:52
A nice little piece Jon. It doesn't take many words to convey a meaning.
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Jon Stainsby
Sat 29th Dec 2018 03:51
Thank you, Big Sal and Ray.