Eternal Relief

Two seconds to make him go

To free me from this pain and woe

A pill, a potion, a knotted rope

To relieve me from this misanthrope.

Relief

◄ A chariot bringing good news

Three Pennies ►

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 29th Dec 2018 03:51

Thank you, Big Sal and Ray.

Big Sal

Fri 28th Dec 2018 23:27

I think of the story of Prometheus when I read this, Jon.

That is epic. Like a trickster pretending to be God while disguised as a man.

Excellent and concise.💪

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raypool

Fri 28th Dec 2018 22:17

A great deal of power in this Jon. It punches above its light weight. Completely unexpected - I'm glad I stopped by

Ray

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 28th Dec 2018 19:17

Thanks, Po. Yes, it is. I was not in a good frame of mind when writing this. Was not sure whether to post or not, but I did. We all have our different sides. I am glad this one doesn't come out very often.

poemagraphic

Fri 28th Dec 2018 19:07

Jon
Your obvious philanthropist way is so at odds from your brilliant quatrain here. That last word is... is... The last word in absolute perfection my friend.

Pithy

Po

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 28th Dec 2018 17:22

So true. Thanks, Brian.

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Brian Maryon

Fri 28th Dec 2018 16:52

A nice little piece Jon. It doesn't take many words to convey a meaning.

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