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12.01 All Done, All Said

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12.01 All Done, All Said

Preamble

This weeks Rhymer's Club theme is 'first'.  Here is my contribution inspired by my intrepid fellow rhymer.

 

Brian's first to post on Sat

Poor wifeys left in bed

At 12.01am on dot

(I gotta go, 'nuf said)

 

I could be done for something though

Accusing Brian leave wifey

While he sits up till Big Ben strikes

I could get in big strifey

 

But hang on Don he could hold hands

With wifey at the ready

Both waiting for Big Ben to strike

While neither thinks of beddy?

 

But after poem's posted Don

Who's first to jump in bed?

I think it's time I left this poem

I've done my bit, all said

 

Don Matthews December 2018

 

Postscript

I could only find racy pics of guys and gals cavorting in bed so had to settle for Big Ben.  Sorry Brian

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Comments

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 1st Dec 2018 16:43

Risque MC

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 1st Dec 2018 15:42

But some might even settle for "Big Ben"! It's merely a question of inclination and time in hand.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 1st Dec 2018 08:01

It's a conundrum Don...wife or WOL.answers on a postcard please.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 1st Dec 2018 07:32

Nice bit of humour Don..?

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