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Breaking the ice

Jane was skating on a very large pond,

Showing off to a boy of whom she was really fond.

The ice in places was very thin,

Suddenly it broke and she fell right in.

 

The boy jumped in and saved her life,

She proposed to him and became his wife.

It all started off cold but ended up nice,

Jane definitely knew how to break the ice.

◄ Scot,a sad loss

A free drink day! ►

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 26th Nov 2018 13:19

Lovely romantic poem, nice one Hugh..?

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