Losing It
Preamble
This week's Rhymer Club theme is fire. Here is my contribution.
I'm losing my spark and my fire
Cos comments are few and quite far
Do you think I am coming 'cross serious ?
Or coming 'cross with some hoo-ha ?
Don Matthews November 2018
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Sat 24th Nov 2018 17:19
Same as Jon except for his last two words.
Only joking Don. Write what you want...you'll get your comments in Heaven.
If you really aspire
To light a fire
In poetical terms
Forget "admire".
Strike YOUR light
And you just might
Be read in silence
But with delight! ?
Yay! I have another
Taylor's stoked by fire
Thankyou for your thoughtfulness
On you I do admire ?
To the point Don..I echo Jon's comment ?
Yay! I have a comment from
My favorite reader Jon
Have to kindle up my fire
Spark up my poet
Don ?
Don, keep 'em coming. I read every one with pleasure.
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Don Matthews
Sat 24th Nov 2018 23:08
Oh Don you've created lovely stuff
(St Peter at the gate)
Come in and lovely us around
Our breath we bate, can't wait
Now don't you bloody hell with us
That language we can't stand
Cos if you do we'll send you back
To Brian, second-hand
But then again he's missing you
He can't comment up here
We'll send you back annointed
And you can re-appear ?
(Bloody hell says Brian...)