underneath
to be nice and clean
inside a latrine
is not the way it should have been
to wipe ones underneath
with a leaf
beneath a tree
is to be truly free
Comments
<Deleted User> (4281)
Tue 29th Jan 2008 16:06
Wow!--Your imagination goes wild in this one.
Ha ha ...It gives me a great laughter...Nature Best!
Thanks...Zuzanna
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<Deleted User> (4281)
Tue 29th Jan 2008 17:57
Sophie- You are a thinker. Great comment and so true. We do mess with the nature. And yes the paper comes from TREES!!
I love this write immensely.
Thought provoking poem!!
GREAT JOB!!