underneath

to be nice and clean

inside a latrine

is not the way it should have been

to wipe ones underneath

with a leaf

beneath a tree

is to be truly free

 

 

 

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Zuzanna Musial

Tue 29th Jan 2008 17:57

Sophie- You are a thinker. Great comment and so true. We do mess with the nature. And yes the paper comes from TREES!!
I love this write immensely.
Thought provoking poem!!
GREAT JOB!!

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Zuzanna Musial

Tue 29th Jan 2008 16:06

Wow!--Your imagination goes wild in this one.
Ha ha ...It gives me a great laughter...Nature Best!

Thanks...Zuzanna

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