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Bidoon

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Bidoon

I want you to know

 That I who have no rights in my country

Still I would fight for my country

Maybe die for my country

Would you?

 

You who declare me untouchable

Unemployable

Unlovable

Uncountable

Would you?

 

As I move unnoticed in the midday heat

Across this land of sand and desert songs

Heart sore, homeless, hopeless and longing

Do you even spare me a glance?

 

You who have had both our portions of life’s chances

Do you observe my dance

Of life and death

My fight for burning breath.

 

And now I have fled

Far from family, friendly arms, Middle eastern charms,

To the lonely lushness

Of a chilly isle

 

And finally

One day

I smile

And the world is changed.

◄ asylum seeker

Gang 13 ►

Comments

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 9th Nov 2018 09:55

This poem packs a tremendous punch...

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Douglas MacGowan

Thu 8th Nov 2018 20:18

A complete political poem is hard to do in only 27 lines, but you do, in fact, make a complete and living statement in this poem.

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keith jeffries

Thu 8th Nov 2018 18:36

A powerful poem which speaks of discrimination where abuse has become normal. Such situations never go away. A poem with a message, not of anger or even resentment but of enquiry to see if any remorse is forthcoming.

Thank you for this

Keith

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