I want a vision

just a small appearance, no healing spring


I reach back and see when You and I were in touch


Now I wonder if You were ever there


So I’d like for You to show Yourself in some small way


Just to give me something to steer with

◄ A Greek Limerick

Going ►


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lynn hahn

Wed 5th Dec 2018 05:20

He comes in when you least expect it. So keep looking Douglas. He's still there.

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Wed 14th Nov 2018 13:32

Haven't we all felt like this. Very poignant Douglas.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 6th Nov 2018 15:31

Lovely a great sense of loss portrayed in your poem.

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Douglas MacGowan

Mon 5th Nov 2018 21:44

Thank you Brian & Keith! Tough times indeed.

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Mon 5th Nov 2018 21:28

I'm guessing you've experienced a loss of faith Douglas.I'm not a believer myself but I can appreciate what this loss means to you. Hope you rediscover it.

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keith jeffries

Mon 5th Nov 2018 21:21


This brief poem conjures up so much in my imagination. I shall have to read it a few more times.

Thank you for this


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