I want a vision
just a small appearance, no healing spring
I reach back and see when You and I were in touch
Now I wonder if You were ever there
So I’d like for You to show Yourself in some small way
Just to give me something to steer with
<Deleted User> (19913)
Wed 14th Nov 2018 13:32
Haven't we all felt like this. Very poignant Douglas.
Lovely a great sense of loss portrayed in your poem.
Thank you Brian & Keith! Tough times indeed.
<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 5th Nov 2018 21:28
I'm guessing you've experienced a loss of faith Douglas.I'm not a believer myself but I can appreciate what this loss means to you. Hope you rediscover it.
Douglas,
This brief poem conjures up so much in my imagination. I shall have to read it a few more times.
Thank you for this
Keith
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lynn hahn
Wed 5th Dec 2018 05:20
He comes in when you least expect it. So keep looking Douglas. He's still there.