Trench-war development

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This butchery of space

wears its frontage

as a pantomine Dame

wears its lipstick

with lashes to match

lashes of despair

and fallen concrete.


Words and image Tommy carroll



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Martin Elder

Sun 4th Nov 2018 15:11

This is an absolute stunner of a poem Tommy. I love the metaphor here. I think war often has been a complete pantomime. certainly the first world war was no exception
Nice one

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keith jeffries

Fri 2nd Nov 2018 18:56


This highly abstract poem has the abiity to conjure. in the mind. so much of which is associated with the horrors of the trenches.

I enjoyed this and thank you


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