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Preamble...this weeks rhymers theme weddings..

 

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I feel your energy our natural synergy
The fire lit in the depth of the essence of what is me
You are the heart the core nothing came close before
I opened and invited you through the door
There could never be more
Cannot be extinguished easily
You conquered me
Lost in the wonder feeling the thunder
Searching for myself
Looking to you beyond you
Returning to what is true
The essence of you
My love, my twin, my errant win
Close.. closer..and there
No despair 
A soul to care
Made aware, a love to share
Connected by an invisible bond
Feelings that go by love and way beyond
A marriage
No carriage
Me you and two
Drunk on love and wine
Feeling fine
Love 
Life
Lover
Wife
No other
No doom and gloom
No spectre in the room
A lovers lost theme tune
Returning to illume

 

© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

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Don Matthews

Sun 14th Oct 2018 00:48

I've finally worked it out Taylor. The shape is you and lover drunk on wine, entwined. Very clever. ?

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Sat 13th Oct 2018 13:05

Excellent piece Taylor

Big Sal

Sat 13th Oct 2018 11:55

Thanks for noticing the profile pic!

Great title by the way. A title that simple but workable could suffice for an anthology.

Has a great rhythm to it.?

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Trevor Alexander

Sat 13th Oct 2018 11:18

From the heart!

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Sat 13th Oct 2018 10:29

and I'm more than willing to marry my comments to this pearler Mrs C!






Rose ?

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 13th Oct 2018 09:12

Lovely xx

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