A Rhyming Idea

               A Rhyming Idea


Boys so curious fumble-fumble

gay little girls spin round and round

Thus until the sky shall crumble

n' the burden of us cracks the ground.


Should the world meet its undoing

One last light will shine so sheer!

–What's the idea?-

Wealth or power or spineless wooing? (nay!)

La poesia, la poesia!


Words in prose and words in music

Shall supersede the mortal end

Through rhyme and stanza, verse and lyric

in one last unison we shall defend!


Fumble-Fumble, Crumble-crumble

Beep-bop, Hip-Hop, Folk and Samba

Rapper, Rocker or Baritone

all of them surely condone -one idea! THE idea!-

La poesia, la poesia!


All humanity’s misgivings, all the crimes and all the sin

All the ugly and wicked things; before “La Fin” appears on screen,

boys shall fumble, girls shall spin as men and women sell their skin.

The world’s atrocious; but deep inside ever so amply wells a spring!


The fountain of creation shall never go dry!

Who drinks its water shall know no fear!

No faux words they shall utter for within them shall lie

only truth! -The mere idea!-

La poesia, la poesia!

◄ Still Here

Consume or be Consumed ►


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Mae Foreman

Sun 3rd Feb 2019 01:11

Thank you Phillip and Rose! I'm glad you like it!!!🎈

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Phillip Kelly

Mon 15th Oct 2018 21:53

I love a good rhyming poem.... WOW AMAZING..!!

And this line .... Is so so beautifully effective... Comparing creation to a fountain and in a way almost personifying creativity..

The fountain of creation shall never dry!

Who drinks its water shall know no fear!

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Rose Casserley

Sat 6th Oct 2018 15:48

" the fountain of creation shall never die "

-not if I've got anything to do with it, Mae!

cheers for this piece dude.

Rose 💋

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Mae Foreman

Fri 5th Oct 2018 14:00

Thank you for your nice words! It was just that really, a rhyming idea, just for fun! Still, simplistic as it may be, I meant every word! 😁

Big Sal

Fri 5th Oct 2018 01:23

Really enjoyed the singular theme that you ran with the entire time. Made it that much more enjoyable to reach the end.😁

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