Why the hell did I agree to this
School swimming lesson
The hell of nineteen wet kids
To get dried and dressed
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Thanks guys. This is my first attempt at a haiku. I think I could find them fun to do, but this one doesn't quite do it for me. I guess there's more to it than counting syllables. Any advice? Should we start a "how to haiku happily" thread?
Bx
You know what Liverpool poet Roger McGough says about haiku Becky:
"The only problem
with haiku is that you just
get started and then..."
I can understand you having a problem with slamming haiku. ?
Just imagine that mayhem Becky. Best got off your chest, and especially in this format.
Ray
Been there Becky tough.....love the poem..thanks Taylor?
I think they're all safe and sound now back at school. I posted this sat outside wait for the end of the school day. Never again!
Gosh that was split-second reactions Big Sal! ?
I guess haiku don't take long to read...I think my style needs work though.
Big Sal
Tue 2nd Oct 2018 14:55
I think this was written in desperation. .?
It's all good Becky, throw in the towel, crack open a fresh tea, and remember that you might have forgotten one of those kids running around.
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Wed 3rd Oct 2018 08:20
PERFECT!??