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Lost

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I stood and watched
As her hair did blow, 
Like branches dancing 
in the wind.


Her eyes left frozen
in an empty stare, 
Leaked fond memories of the
love that once lived there.


No place left for her love to grow. 
She stagnates, even in her dreams. 
Her life stiffened,
like the roots buried deep beneath the one family tree.

 

The season pass.
The colours change, her hair from red to grey.
Her eyes unchanged.
The empty stare, still lost.
Looking into nowhere. 

 

 

Photo taken by me @ Glendalough, Co. Wicklow. Ireland. 

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Emer Ni Chorra

Fri 28th Sep 2018 21:30

Thank you Keith. It is good to be back. It felt great to write again. Hopefully it won't take 9 months or thereabouts for me to write another. ?

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keith jeffries

Fri 28th Sep 2018 20:53

Emer,

I had given some thought of going to the Missing Persons Bureau but this welcomed poem put my mind at ease. Welcome back.

This poem is gentle in its lassitude but with a promise of hope within reach. The words, ¨her hair from red to grey ¨says something but I am uncertain as to what.
Well done Emer.

Keith

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Emer Ni Chorra

Fri 28th Sep 2018 16:04

Thanks David. I was lost for words a long time so it felt good writing again last night. As always, it is great to hear your thoughts. I have been popping in and out of here to read from time to time. Your writing.. I find most powerful. Keep it up.

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Emer Ni Chorra

Fri 28th Sep 2018 10:23

Thank you for stopping by and commenting such kind words, Anya. My first piece of writing in 9 months. ?

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Emer Ni Chorra

Fri 28th Sep 2018 09:29

Thank you Big Sal. I enjoy taking photograhs, especially of nature. Glad you liked the recital. It has been a while since I recited my writing.

Poetikaly Anointed, thank you for sharing your thoughts. Grief is incredibly painful. Stay strong. Hugs.

Big Sal

Fri 28th Sep 2018 03:36

Great picture too, and recital.?

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Poetikaly Anointed

Fri 28th Sep 2018 03:16

Awesome write.

Sadly, I can relate to this. A dying love of any kind is tragic. It hurts when the family you knew is the once you lost...No mommy...no daddy...just baby in the middle.

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