hiding places (discernment)
In the quiet I listen to some
whispered words you've spoke
and some you never have--
it's like putting my ear to a conch
and hearing all the silence we protect
being lifted from concealment by a noisy sea.
Comments
Stripped down verse is so-wonderfully terse.
elPintor
Fri 7th Sep 2018 22:32
Mac, you're a dear--I can only hope what you say is true.
And, David, that's a lovely comment, too--fantastic: words that multi-task.
..here's to hoping for a quick recovery from a somewhat exhausting week, and the luxury of clarity with which to communicate.
Rachel x
Yes, it resonates with me too tho. Probably with most people, which is part of what makes it so beautiful!
elPintor
Wed 5th Sep 2018 00:09
Thanks, Martin and Mac.
There are special associations hidden in this one--I'm happy that it touched you.
Rachel
So beautiful!
I feel privileged to be privy to your hiding place, beautifully put and very evocative with the conch shell.
Nice one Rachel
elPintor
Thu 30th Aug 2018 00:47
I realize we're each in our separate places and as such I appreciate your comments and reading..
lost for comments for now...
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=kr4DNZz_8zI
privacy and sharing thoughts in an imagined scenario, very effective Rachel, a proper muse.
Ray
Big Sal
Wed 29th Aug 2018 14:09
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<Deleted User> (19913)
Wed 29th Aug 2018 11:54
Beautiful Rachel
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elPintor
Mon 17th Sep 2018 21:29
Thanks John. I'm in the midst of a pretty major life shake-up and am finding it near impossible to expound.