I Need Minds

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I need minds

I need sharp


with heart

with minds

and hearts 

and thinking heads

with minds

and knowing

knowing heads

take those lips

and so take my

my ears and...

and just start ...

...whispering to me...

◄ The bright bright sun

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 6th Jan 2010 18:43

re the confusion Tommy-sorry-it was when you said you had a singer in mind-was it going to be you-I sensed caterwaulings!(a joke)-?Stefxx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 6th Jan 2010 17:48

please.please! Tommy C! no caterwaulings! just shhmashin poems,that are concise,precise and,oh go on then! nice-see you in my unwet dreams. Stefano de Bougelier

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 6th Jan 2010 16:19

I like this too, it's subtle. And I always like .... dots in things - for some reason! I go to a local writing group and there was a new person there who said I shoudn't start a sentence with "And" !!! Pah!!! Might leave, or just start EVERY sentence with AND! Don't know why I'm telling you this, thought you might understand. xx

Deborah Jordan

Wed 6th Jan 2010 14:36

I like this Tommy..it sounds like a song..by who..i don't know..well, you obviously, but i'm trying to imagine who'd sound right singing it.or maybe you don't want it to be a song. in which case, I apologise. I like it as it is, primarily. Deb : )

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