I Need Minds
I need minds
I need sharp
minds
with heart
with minds
and hearts
and thinking heads
with minds
and knowing
knowing heads
take those lips
and so take my
my ears and...
and just start ...
...whispering to me...
Comments
<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 6th Jan 2010 17:48
please.please! Tommy C! no caterwaulings! just shhmashin poems,that are concise,precise and,oh go on then! nice-see you in my unwet dreams. Stefano de Bougelier
I like this too, it's subtle. And I always like .... dots in things - for some reason! I go to a local writing group and there was a new person there who said I shoudn't start a sentence with "And" !!! Pah!!! Might leave, or just start EVERY sentence with AND! Don't know why I'm telling you this, thought you might understand. xx
Deborah Jordan Bailey
Wed 6th Jan 2010 14:36
I like this Tommy..it sounds like a song..by who..i don't know..well, you obviously, but i'm trying to imagine who'd sound right singing it.or maybe you don't want it to be a song. in which case, I apologise. I like it as it is, primarily. Deb : )
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 6th Jan 2010 18:43
re the confusion Tommy-sorry-it was when you said you had a singer in mind-was it going to be you-I sensed caterwaulings!(a joke)-?Stefxx