Her smile

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Where butter melts

and honey drips

the parting comes

from parted lips

my fingers trace

the smear of dew

my knowing touch

from knowing you.

 

Words and image Tommy Carroll

 

 

 

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 25th Aug 2018 20:20

Wonderfully woven..

jennifer Malden

Sat 25th Aug 2018 18:14

Agree there is something Elizabethan about it- Lovely writing - sweet and short.

Jennifer

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Wolfgar Miere

Sat 25th Aug 2018 16:52

Exquisite and lush Tommy. You are a master of brevity.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 25th Aug 2018 15:59

Timeless in form and expression, this travels down the years as if from some Elizabethan wooing his love.

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