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The fun in the sun

Imagine in public with a hot guy beside
People are watching you, and your fumbling of belt
As you patiently wait to expose hardness melt
As savoury to mouth with your tongue stuck out wide

Going down on your knees to lick up the first taste
You feel his reaction as your wetness caress
Around his shaft your movement suggest a great finesse
Making hardness follow with an increased fast pace

As onlookers swallow the sight given to them
You do the same to drops that fill up your found ego
That this hunk's explosion blew far without veto

The round of applauses shocks into your system's gem
As pride glows onto face and you salute the crowd
Hoping for the next one to be as well endowed

 

◄ Her smile

Breathing ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 25th Aug 2018 07:33

We don't need an adult section Painter. Personally I am happy to read extreme adult stuff, as long as I am free to then comment as I see fit.

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Louis Audet

Sat 25th Aug 2018 03:31

I write what crosses my mind or what I've seen with my own eyes, but the audience needs to guess from which category the poem falls under.

Thanks Rachel for your support. This is obviously not my first controversial poem on WOL. This poem is relatively tame to some of the others.

elPintor

Sat 25th Aug 2018 02:44

I applaud you, Louis, and good to see you posting such controversial rhyme.

Rachel

PS
To all of WoL who object, do we need an adult division? Maybe to send our writings into the committee for rating? Or maybe to see if they'll pass a swimming test through the current sea change?

Sorry, Louis

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John Coopey

Fri 24th Aug 2018 21:07

"I could write a sonnet
While you are sat upon it"

<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 24th Aug 2018 09:01

Yuk!

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