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You Held Me With Your Tears

You Held Me With Your Tears

You played to all my fears
You held me with your tears
I'm trying to hold on
Even tho all love has gone

You bound me in your chains
Your love drove me insane
I tried to leave again 

You held me with your tears

A moment in my life
I held you as my wife
It wasn't meant to be
I'm trying to break free

I caught your reflected smile
Still crying all the while
You played me like a harp
You broke my weary heart

You held me with your tears

Our child used like a weapon
The isolation that you threaten
Pulling my invisible cord
While screaming that you're bored

My feelings have all gone
I just can't carry on

I'm running on a wheel
My pain I can't conceal
I try to keep it real
The misery I feel

I beg you let me be
Why can you not see
I just want to be free

Don't hold me with your tears

© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

◄ A Hot Evening in August

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Hugh

Mon 6th Aug 2018 10:44

An unique and excellent experience reading this,brilliant how you have re used the title so effectively emphasising the effect.What's the point of reading a long novel when you could read this a few times and get a more concise descriptive drama and meaning?Well done

Big Sal

Sun 5th Aug 2018 16:52

Hopefully this is one of those that you're saving.?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 5th Aug 2018 16:17

Your 'subjects' are very gripping, universal and honest.

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Sun 5th Aug 2018 13:38

Wow! A very intense, emotional piece. Extraordinary!

Jane❤

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Sun 5th Aug 2018 11:50

I felt the pain and desperation, Taylor. Very raw and real. Great work.

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Don Matthews

Sun 5th Aug 2018 10:45

Nice rhyming Taylor

D?

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Sun 5th Aug 2018 09:40

Beautiful rhythm.Exuberant. Emotive.

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