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A Hot Evening in August

A Hot Evening in August

Dew drops sit atop the grass.
Waiting for the clouds to pass.
Evaporating Into to the air.
As I recline in my chair.

Vines hang heavy with their fruit.
Waiting to be robbed of their loot.
Languorously I observe the passing of the day.
An avenue of trees in full leaf as they sway.

Sipping leisuely from a frosted glass.
Wishing this moment would never pass.
Reflecting on the fleeting quality of time.
As I sit and sip my wine.
Your furtive glances even now.
The unbidden but welcome raising of a brow.

Gently as the day flows on.
Dew drops replaced by a searing sun.
The song of the Cicada becomes a deafening hum.
The passing river charts it's inevitable course.
Ever onwards no remorse.

A Gallic Rooster proudly mounted on the entrance gate.
His owners presence he patiently awaits.
As the birds all take flight.
The evening softly welcoming the night.

A cool breeze gently caresses my skin.
Silken sheets to wrap myself in.
Drifting slowly into a restful slumber.
Did I ever get that guys number.

© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Martin Elder

Sat 4th Aug 2018 22:57

This does sound like an idyllic summer evening of which we haven't had many of here in the U.K.
but lovely description here Taylor

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Becky Who

Sat 4th Aug 2018 22:41

I really like it. Very vivid imagery about a hot summer evening, with a couple of intriguing questions thrown in - "furtive glance", the last line as Don says. Thank you!

Big Sal

Sat 4th Aug 2018 16:06

"Wishing this moment would never pass," I could just hear this line repeated as I read. Would make a beautiful chorus to a beautiful poem. You could write songs Taylor.?

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Hugh

Sat 4th Aug 2018 15:46

"Vines hang heavy with their fruit.
waiting to be robbed of their loot."
Great descriptions with fabulous rhymes.

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Sat 4th Aug 2018 15:19

A beautifully descriptive poem...I felt like I was there.?

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Sat 4th Aug 2018 15:03

Good rhyme.Beautiful poem.loved and liked.

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Don Matthews

Sat 4th Aug 2018 15:00

Like it Taylor. 'Languorously'- now there's a nice word. The last line? Yes!.. Clever poem ?

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