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WOL's New Rhymers Club

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WOL's New Rhymers Club

 

Preamble

My mind has two parts – Serious and Comic. They play around at times and need watching to see they don't get up to mischief. I personify them in my poetry

 

 

Before I do begin

I must apologise

My poem seemed to go right on

And on before my eyes

 

Let me introduce

A new group on the site

A rag-tag group of rhymers

Establishing their right

 

A right to use their specialty

A specialty they chose

To carry thoughts, emotions

In preference to prose

 

Rhyme is not in fashion

As 'twas in Shakespeare's time

Publishers not interested

What's this? A silly rhyme?

 

But rhyme has got it's own way

Unique from all the rest

Delivering Comic, Serious

It stands the time, the test

 

You'll notice I've used Serious

To verse away awhile

Now it's your turn Comic

Put on our face, a smile

 

Hello? 'Tis I, Comic here

Created by my Keeper

While Serious has been rambling

I've been fast asleeper

 

We're top-class educated

The members of our Club

To illustrate, we use words

Like rub a dub a dub

 

Our froggie's also hopped in

And brought his rhyme machine

He's so excited, cannot wait

See him on your screen?

 

ribbit...ribbit...ribbit

ribbit...ribbit...ribbit

 

Let me try translate this

I gotta get it right

He's so well-educated

His poem says 'croak, goodnight'

 

As Comic, I do play around

Bring smiles and bright our day

By skilful intertwining

Words, emotions, play

 

Our Club is up to seven now

All rhyming merrily

Rhyming with their breakfast

And rhyming with their tea

 

You ask me why they are not

Rhyming with their lunch?

They need to get some sustenance

Too busy going munch

 

The Club has it's headquarters

Where FUN BUS HQ is

And both ably looked after

By Tina, Gina's sis

 

So if you'd like to join

Send sample to our leader

Choose any theme you want to

Use bouncing playful meter

 

Or if you would prefer

To book an empty seat

Simply place request

On the COMMENT sheet

 

Don Matthews August 2018

RHYMERS CLUB

◄ FUN BUS : Don Patents Our Bus

FUN BUS: Celebrates National Hottie Day ►

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Don Matthews

Sun 5th Aug 2018 01:30

Ray

Any trips on FUN BUS
Are free, and so no fare
What we have to watch out
Gina not turn up bare

Now on the other hand
We secretly might hope
She will indeed shed off
But Brian, will he cope?

As creator of this FUN BUS
And Gina's ABC's
'Tis me who decides what happens
'Tis me who holds the keys

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 4th Aug 2018 20:17

Blakey!!!

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raypool

Sat 4th Aug 2018 14:26

Thanks for booking me a front seat in the bus Don. What worries me is that I don't have a return fare; I don't think that will be a problem though with the natural optimism onboard!

Ray (ex inspector).

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Don Matthews

Sat 4th Aug 2018 01:08

Ray,

The FUN BUS Committee have considered your re-application and believe you have 'turned over a new leaf' and are happy to accept you on the FUN BUS, as long as you behave. Any mischief-making and you will face the wrath of Tina and Gina. Gosh, that even scares me...

All the gang at FB HQ have forgiven you, even froggie is ribbeting with joy.

They all realise we have 'off'' days where we get of bed the wrong side.

We hope you get out on the right side this Saturday for National Hottie Day and join us a new member on the FUN BUS. Don's driving so who knows what could happen....

D?

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raypool

Fri 3rd Aug 2018 18:10

Don, please accept my apologies for trying to be clever with an appalling comment; I should know better, and I appreciate you do what you do with the best of motives. I feel bad about it.

All the very best. Ray

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Don Matthews

Fri 3rd Aug 2018 17:35

Ray

After due consideration at Committee level your application for entry to the FUN BUS has been refused.

You may re-apply at a future date showing the Committee why they should reconsider your new application.

FUN BUS Committee

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Don Matthews

Fri 3rd Aug 2018 09:59

I'm going off rhyme. (What's going on?...)
Brian has made a true and important comment
No creative person works in a vacuum. .

I'm creative, but I need input from others. I can't work in a vacuum. Brian created Tina/Keith/Tyson and without these characters the FUN BUS concept would not be where it is today.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 3rd Aug 2018 08:24

The skill of rhymers
An inherent talent
Brought to life
By seven people

<Deleted User> (19836)

Fri 3rd Aug 2018 07:34

Awesome!❤

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 3rd Aug 2018 06:17

Loving it Don, both parts.?

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