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Mask


The show I put on is just for show.
The glow I wear is just a glow.
A shine so fragile it may break.
The frosted mirror.
 Opaque.


© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

Extract from Shhhh!!!! We Don't Talk About That ►

Comments

Big Sal

Sun 22nd Jul 2018 16:14

Simple, easy flowing, and I noticed your internal rhyme aided your imagery and poetic diction nicely. It all really came together well.?

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Martin Elder

Sun 22nd Jul 2018 14:42

I think a lot of us put on this sometimes amazing show. When asked are we alright we automatically say fine, even though we are not. Good stuff
As Keith says keep writing

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keith jeffries

Sun 22nd Jul 2018 13:20

Taylor,
Keep writing....keep writing
Keith

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