ARCANA

WHEN....THE....BIG....HAND....IS....ON....TWELVE

THE....BIG....MOUSE....RUNS....DOWN....THE....PIPE

THE....SKY....SCREAMS...GOODNIGHT

NO....LOGIC....CAN....CURE....YOU....NOW

THE....MOUSE....WAS....YOUR....ONLY....FRIEND

THE....LITTLE....HAND....IS....NOT....FAR....BEHIND

THE....SWEEP....OF....CLAWED....FATE

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Sun 1st Jul 2018 22:17

Clocks and mice, always a fascinating combination.
I like what you have done here Ray.
Always enjoy your work.

Hannah

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raypool

Sat 30th Jun 2018 20:42

How kind Suki. A bit of fantasy for a change. A perverse idea in a nursery rhyme style. A compliment always welcome. !

Glad you liked it Darren. Just an impulse really.

Hazel, indeed the strictness and weight of time.

Thank you Wood. I'll take that!

Thanks for dropping by Jennifer. I suppose it's a one off experiment.

Thanks for the likes folks: Col. Damon Anya and Darren.

Ray

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jennifer Malden

Sat 30th Jun 2018 16:20

Hi Ray!

Spot on as usual - very sad but loved it - liked the hesitating recording too.

Jennifer

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Wood

Sat 30th Jun 2018 02:00

was very sweet

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Hazel ettridge

Fri 29th Jun 2018 08:31

Great poem. Tempus fugit and all that.

<Deleted User> (19421)

Fri 29th Jun 2018 06:51

Love....the....recording....Ray....Splendid....
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suki spangles

Fri 29th Jun 2018 04:09

Hi there Ray,

It's really fabulous to listen to two very distinct yet fabulous recordings - yours and David's.

This could be an excerpt from an undiscovered Sam Beckett play: One Minute to Midnight, perhaps?

Fab work!

Suki

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