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Down, but not out

My heart remains broken
but my blood still streams
around my body.

My mind still mourns
but my thoughts continue
to create dreams.

My skin no longer feels your touch
but the impressions
still remain.

My emotions are torn
but the desire
still survives.

◄ An empty house, a full life

Fallen angel ►

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 30th Jul 2018 10:52

Thank you, Jane ❤

<Deleted User> (19836)

Mon 30th Jul 2018 07:57

Absolutely beautiful...giving the strength to carry on.❤

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 27th Jul 2018 06:30

Thank you, AM.

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AM Cash

Thu 26th Jul 2018 21:14

I great poem capturing that feeling of loss and hurt in just a few powerful lines
AM Cash

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Jon Stainsby

Sun 24th Jun 2018 09:24

Thank you both.

<Deleted User> (19421)

Sat 23rd Jun 2018 11:40

Lovely stuff Jon

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