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I want to make a place

that is not of pain.

Built of life and built.

Not of earth

but of heaven

a shape of creation

built together

with spirit rubies

and other precious stones.

I cant explain

but I try to understand.

It is called .....righteousness.



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Andy N

Thu 24th Dec 2009 08:10

i enjoyed this too.. perhaps would have split up the last line into 2 lines and added a space to give it a pause but well wrote i think..

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kealan coady

Wed 23rd Dec 2009 01:37

Thought-provoking and to the point. I enjoyed reading this.

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