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Death of a doll

your breath wails

 

                forlorn hope of oblivion

 

to close your eyes too

 

disappear forever

 

                   that black smile 

 

cut across your face

 

                     But death waits

 

As the pin stick, passes through 

                     

                       Your hart

 

But not your eyes

 

                        To watch your own lingering 

 

Dance before your eyes

◄ They step

Baying ►

Comments

DESMOND CHILDS

Thu 21st Jun 2018 12:11

Thank you Binte, for the like.



All the best des

DESMOND CHILDS

Tue 19th Jun 2018 20:50

Thanks Colin and Darren, your comments are appreciated. Thanks Anya and Keith for the likes.


All the best des

<Deleted User> (19421)

Tue 19th Jun 2018 07:25

Great poem....

<Deleted User> (13762)

Mon 18th Jun 2018 08:44

great title Des and a chilling read to boot. Thanks for posting. Col.

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