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eternal slumber

He griped her hand tight

without her consent carried her with him

it was so sudden it took her minutes to fight

he was taken her to a room very grim,

 

pushed her in ruthlessly

there was no light nor hope

shut the door loudly no way to flea

alone in an envelope,

 

to be submerged by the night

years of work to suppress tears unshed   

are being taken away in blink of an eye

crying inside she screams every name that pops in her head,

 

hoping anyone had enough dedication

no one came and no ones to blame

she knew that nobody could understand desolation

but everyone she loved left he to be framed,

 

abandoned by all she chooses to abandon her own

to the one that was always too close to her

eaten to the bones

doomed to eternal slumber,

 

the monster that years fasted

is now awake holding a big scar

created by tears blood and hatred

it only knows how to make war ,

 

◄ the pain of silence

reflection ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 15th Jun 2018 17:33

Get a hamster Racha...it's safer!

elPintor

Fri 15th Jun 2018 17:25

My apologies, Racha. That was my imagination getting the better of me.. I think I should work on improving my perceptive skills.

Rachel

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racha chafik

Fri 15th Jun 2018 17:07

oh yeah i actually showed this one to my brother and he thought it was about rape well i guess i made it seem like it was about something bad , but really not its just that my cat inspired me , she was too loud for my brother so he locked her in a room when she was out she was crazy and so the person in this poem was just locked up , well its my imagination haha but thank you rachel for reading my poems

elPintor

Fri 15th Jun 2018 04:16

I would say to her please, do not give your life to the trauma. It is overwhelming but you will move beyond it. I know you are strong because you are here.

But in the mean time, make war, if that's all that you know--sometimes it's necessary.

Good love to you, Racha.

Safety and peace to you,

Rachel xx

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racha chafik

Thu 14th Jun 2018 03:43

thank you i will

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Elizabeth Ogunrinola

Thu 14th Jun 2018 03:38

great piece. please do follow my blog and support elizabethogunrinola.wordpress.com

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