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Spend your wishes

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Spend your wishes
to buy your needs
with wants you queue
to purchase dreams
deep inside the vault
they lay
a wealth of riches
declares the lie.

 

Words and foto Tommy Carroll

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 7th May 2018 14:49

The theme appeals a lot and I think the first four lines could
stand alone....complete.

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