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Paradise

 

When I die

I'd hate to lie

in a cold deathgarden

bones to harden

in a stony tomb.

When I die

I'd like to lie

in that place

where ferns like lace

hide a jade snake's lair.

Where ancient pines

shelter the lines

of scarlet cherries.

Where pure magic flows

slaking the rows

of humble kitchen plants.

When I die I'd like to lie

in the warm windrace

in that place

 which is already Paradise.

 

◄ For Timmy

mediterranean august ►

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Cate Greenlees

Fri 4th May 2018 23:14

Cleverly crafted and beautifully written. Enjoyed reading this .
Cate

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Thu 3rd May 2018 21:28

What a cracking poem and such a joy to read. Thanks for sharing Jennifer. Save me a plot. Colin.

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