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Look at the light of the candle

flickering like a spirit trapped in the wine glass,

who's watching over this close communion?

It seems you can forget a face

just like anything else,

like the rocks and the flowers

on the hillside slipping into the tranquil

night around us.

Leaving behind the aftermath of a scene,

this little table with it's plates,

olive stones and breadcrumbs.

What else can you haul out of the darkness?

Even the voice is faint,

Put your ear here and listen but

there is only the crickets singing to the moon,

the ocean breathing in and out,

the olive trees rattling in the night wind

dry as mourners clearing their throats.

◄ 4am

Morning Thought ►

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Martin Elder

Thu 22nd Feb 2018 22:56

Love the comparison between a religious form of communion and what we see and feel in life .
great stuff

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raypool

Wed 21st Feb 2018 12:11

A wonderful tone picture like a tapestry and it has your indelible hallmark Tom. Thoughtful and languid, all done without artifice.

Ray

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