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A dream itself is but a shadow

In the grey cloudlight of a pre-dawn moon

something stayed my dream

a stray insistent noise heard through sleep

the uncertain call of the hunting owl:

I am knelt naked at the window -

beneath, the frosted grass glimmers in the pale creamglow

hazy through the early swirls of mist

but not a shade or waft disturbs the spectral scene

although my flesh seems chilled by some slight air.

The owls have drifted far and their calls echo off

skeletal trees standing black guardians to the scene

holding the far world at bay while dark unlit patches

shade lost and hidden secrets in the abyss below

I, visitor to this spirit world, observer

to this closer orbit, like the owls,

hunt for wraiths in the night's phantasy

seeking the whisper, the faint breath that woke me

the touch that raised the hairs on my arm

yet vanished as I called and called

my cries fading into the garden airs

as if she had never been

dreamsghostsHamletmoonlightowlsphantasmsshades

◄ Aberystwyth Scenes, 1970

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Chris Armstrong

Mon 12th Feb 2018 11:21

Thanks, Colin - I wondered where you were going with the Sepulchrave reference, until I got to the owls! I was looking for a ghostly, night-time, dreamlike feeling focusing on lost love. I only referenced Hamlet as when I was searching around for a better title than the original working title I half remembered (and had to look it up) the new title, which fitted perfectly - Hamlet Act 2 Sc 2!

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Sun 11th Feb 2018 20:13

It feels like you had great fun playing with these images Chris. You tagged Hamlet but I was thinking Sepulchrave, 76th Earl of Groan and Lord of Mervyn Peake's Gormenghast. After the burning of his library by Steerpike he loses his mind and adopts the character of the Death Owl. All good stuff - yours, Peake's and Shakespeare. Thanks. Thoroughly enjoyed. Colin.

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