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With apologies to . . just about everyone

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Do not go gentle into middle age

don't be like William's robin in a cage

stay boisterous, putting heaven in a rage

don't have a perm, watch bargain hunt and don't wear beige.

Please don't compare me to a summer's day

it's winter now, I'll soon be on my way.

The gales are blowing and the lightning's bright.

Rebellious, I'll go walking into this bad night.

Heaven may not have anything to show more fair

but time is running out so I don't care.

A rose by any other name would still smell sweet

put stinging nettles in your hair and have bare feet.

Don't wander quietly into the half light.

Take all the risks you can, fight the good fight.

And me, well I'll be tramping over muddy hills

in hob-nailed boots, stamping on all those wretched daffodils!

(just kidding)

 

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Dave Bradley

Wed 2nd Dec 2009 09:19

Great!

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jane wilcock

Tue 24th Nov 2009 21:05

great and in agreement!!

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Isobel

Tue 24th Nov 2009 20:50

Agree whole heartedly - this could have been written for me but for the fact that I'm far too young to worry about middle age....Love it.

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Cate Greenlees

Tue 24th Nov 2009 12:27

sos darlings but rebellious has two "l"s in it.... just cant help it, its the teacher in me coming out!!!!!Cate xx

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 24th Nov 2009 06:33

Thanks Thauma (if I may call you that). Maybe it's not rebelious enough - it starts with an apology and ends "Just Kidding!" And now I've started apologising for it! Better go and do something rebellious! (And thanks everyone else for commenting too!)

Ta Cate - maybe spelling rebellious wrong is as rebellious as I get!

<Deleted User> (7073)

Tue 24th Nov 2009 02:28

My boots on , they were made for walking ha ha I like rebelious poems ;-))

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Cate Greenlees

Mon 23rd Nov 2009 23:12

Ah but will you wear purple and a red hat which doesnt match??? lol
Cate xx

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Christopher Dawson

Mon 23rd Nov 2009 21:14

~smile~

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 23rd Nov 2009 14:23

A good gust of exhilaration on a dreary day.

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