Impressive (haiku)

Try battling me

You have so much potential

That I’d root for you

◄ What You Left Me

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Tue 23rd Jan 2018 21:13

Ending caught me off guard. Thanks for sharing.

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Isurugi Noe

Fri 19th Jan 2018 15:35

"A sense of admiration for a foe" is precisely what I was trying to convey. Thank you for the articulation, David. Isurugi

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Isurugi Noe

Fri 19th Jan 2018 13:38

Thank you all. I see what you are saying Jemima and I like it too. But I think it would take away from it as well. If someone is not going against you, then there is nothing (or not very much) impressive about the fact that you are rooting for them. Don't you agree? Isurugi

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Jemima Jones

Fri 19th Jan 2018 11:30

lovely Isurugi but if you'll pardon me I think the first line would have kicked the haiku off much better had it read
'Try growing with me' and that would have nicely connected it to the word 'root' Thank you. Jemima.

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Douglas MacGowan

Fri 19th Jan 2018 07:36

Clever and funny. I liked it.

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