Pinup Girl


Me flat,

Hang me up

With pins and on

Stringy wire strings

So you can look at me,

And wonder where the time went,

And wonder where that sweet girl went.

But then, pictures are perfect

Instances of moments

Zoomed to focus on

One memory,




◄ A Criminal Mind

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 8th Nov 2017 12:04

Great format, like an arrowhead shot on target. Brief and sizzling, and honest. And hard. All in 15 short lines. The title is superb in its 'black humour'. IMHO, you have real talent.

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Tia Lattanzio

Tue 7th Nov 2017 21:28

Martin Elder,
Thank you so much! Your comments mean a lot to me!

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Martin Elder

Tue 7th Nov 2017 16:37

Nice one Tia. I love the way this one bounces a long to its own beat

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