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a girl sits with a book in her lap, being too heavy for her scrawny legs, it slips and clatters to the floor beneath her desk. the teacher expresses exasperation at her inattentiveness and offers to teach her skills to fix her focus

that girl is me

and i like being broken.

 

the vice president of the united states believes homosexuals are going to hell. he said gay couples signaled societal collapse and says he wants LGBTQ youth to undergo conversion therapy to be cured

he is talking about me

and i like being broken.

 

a soul reaches for the divine in the mundane. it pulses in time with the traffic thrumming over the twisting multilayered freeways. it's told over and over again to be more discerning, that it needs to readjust its taste

that soul is mine

and i like being broken.

 

returning from vacation, a professional with bright purple hair now has several new markings inked on her body with the rat-a-tat of the tattoo needle. she is called into her superior’s office and receives a lecture on how to repair her image.

that professional is me

and i like being broken.

 

a heart connects profoundly with more than one lover at a time. it often hears how unnatural that is, how monogamy is the only way to express true love and this openness is deviant.

that heart is in my chest

and i like being broken.

 

a girl sits with a tablet in her lap and sobs, for the people hurting, for victims of domestic terrorism, for the inadequacy of her efforts to stem the tide of hate. social media is flooded with assertions that this is the price of living in a land that values free speech  

that girl is me

and i don’t like being broken like this.

 

◄ August 12

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Stu Buck

Wed 16th Aug 2017 11:56

i agree wholeheartedly with whats already been said, this is excellent, dark and punchy, a proper soul-bearing

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 15th Aug 2017 17:14

Conflict, personal and general, demands that we take note
and have opinions. The theme is always topical and I
enjoyed this.

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Neill Barnard

Tue 15th Aug 2017 07:19

Hi Dana

Just want to say that this is soo well written, and it embodies how most people feel, cause everyone is broken in their own way.

You might feel like you are failing at a lot of things, however you will find in time that passes, and you definitely did not fail at writing this poem.

Kind regards

Neill

elPintor

Tue 15th Aug 2017 04:29

Dana, if I could like this twice, I would.

I would love to hear your voice on this, Dana..you couldn't fail.

Rachel x

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